I felt like there was too much colour in my first comic so I drained it all away. I also noticed that in panel five, the way the hill went through the neck of the guy on the left made it look like his head was floating in mid-air, so that’s something I’ll have to be careful of. I don’t like having the comic title on every page so I’ve put it sticking out to the left where I can remove it if I want to. And I’ve put my name at the bottom.


I think I’ll just post the comic as thumbnails in this journal. That way people can click on the ‘Cosmic Latte’ tag and look at all the comic entries, or they could click on the ‘crap David has written’ tag and see everything else.